June 14, 2004

  • The Box


    she has a broken spirit
    she has a wonded soul
    nothing can fix her
    no tears are shed
    they have all been cried
    only blue pools of despair
    they are bright, sad pools
    she’s so broken
    but still she goes on
    she doesn’t ask for much
    her pleas go unheard
    a little girl
    locked in a room
    with nothing but a box
    the box has been opened
    but now it is closed
    the secrets held within
    are silent again
    she sits in the middle of the room
    holding the box in her hands
    the door is locked
    only a few can enter
    but all who have
    have broken her tiny litte heart
    her eyes stare at the box
    it is quite small
    for all the secrets held within
    she keeps the box safe
    she forever listens
    listens for the knock at the door
    somehow hoping this knock sounds different
    no longer hollow like all the others
    she’s patient in her wait
    she never moves
    her eyes never leave the box
    her broken soul
    and wounded spirit
    keep her there
    there are no windows in this room
    it is white
    plain
    the door is white
    plain
    in her mind’s eye
    colors are splashed all over
    blues pinks oranges reds yellows greens and purples
    her pain is kept in this box
    she wished they all could see
    see her pain and cry with her
    but they don’t care
    she waits
    energy builds inside of her
    tension
    f
    e
    a
    r
    anxiety
    she waits
    f
    e
    a
    r
    she waits
    she throws the box at the door
    a scream
    long
    never ending
    her box is open once again
    her broken spirit
    and wounded soul
    f
    e
    a
    r
    she sits
    calm
    her box is shattered
    forever open
    the scream forever heard
    she cries

Comments (8)

  • That is amazing, Crystal.  I’m jealous.

  • “We covet what we see every day.” – The Silence of the Lambs

    Envy is a deadly sin, you know.

  • What a heartwrenching poem. I will cry with you. These puddles of misery can be shared by the two of us. There is always something to be sad about. But always keep in mind, there is always something to be happy about. Look for it. Find it. Grasp it, but do not choke it. Live and let live.<– That’s for you. A smile for you. You need no tears in your life. I give you my happiness.

  • WOW…You are such a good writer! I am inspired from this, I knew you liked writing but I have never seen something like this from you. This was Awesome! Amazing :)

  • wow. that was so good. i like poetry. you’re very good at it.

  • Usually when I write like that hot tears are streaming down my cheeks.

    Impressive.

  • I am amazed…. it’s beautiful.

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