November 16, 2009
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I Hate
I hate my elementary poetry,
With clichés and overused phrases.
I hate my plain way of speaking,
With no pretty words.I hate how I can’t write anymore,
How my fingers no longer fly across the keyboard.
I hate how I’m a ghost now,
Of who I once was.I hate how I sit thinking,
‘What the fuck am I supposed to write?’
I hate how I don’t see inspiration,
In this world full of muses.I hate how my vision is lost,
I can’t find it.
I hate how my fingers are still now,
My brain fried.I hate how it makes me want to cry.
Comments (14)
Your poetry is better than mine.
Looks to me like you write just fine.
@mathematicalbagpiper - @johnny_hopkins - Thank you. <3
I like the line “in this world full of muses.”
I feel like this a LOT.
@AibellFaeire - Thanks..that’s almost the only line I like, lol
@AibellFaeire - I like that line, too.
@crazy2love - Doesn’t sound like elementary poetry to me!
Lost muses seems to be going the rounds. Where are they all going is what I want to know! Is there a muse convention we are unaware of?
@muses_muse - Thank you
@AnamcharaConcepts - I don’t know, but it’s upsetting!
There is no way I can hate your work
@godfatherofgreenbay - Aww thanks
I think you’re an amazing writer.
@MarnieAyn - Aww thank you =]
I love this! I so know how it is to feel that. Really good piece
Looks ok to me.