June 27, 2010
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rain against my window panes
Falling asleep
to the sounds of thunder
And rain slanting
against the windows
Wishing you were here
beside me
Your body curled
against mine
My heart grows cold
and alone
With my bed devoid
of your presence
The tears toll
slowly
down my cheeks
As the ache
takes over my soul
And I listen to the sound
of the rain
against my window panes
Comments (17)
Rain sure can bring out the sad thoughts. Like the fotos.
Love falling asleep to rain.
Hey! Thanks for visiting again! God bless, ~ Pete
“Since you were precious in My sight, you have been honored, and I have
loved you…” Isaiah 43:4 (ref. my Xanga post of 1/24/2010 AD)
Love can be beautiful, but when it all goes down , all there is left are memories.. I like this poem. Touched my heart.
Simply amazing. Great work!
I love rain, hate heartache; this was beautiful<3
good poem. covers where I’m at
excellent work
I love the rain thunder scares me though!
Bittersweet and pretty. Sometimes the most beautiful things in life are the saddest.
I loved those photos, and especially the phrase: My heart grows cold
and alone
With my bed devoid
of your presence
the fisrt picture is sweeeet !
&niiice post (:
I love the sound of the rain. And the part about wanting someone next to you, I can relate to that so well – I hate sleeping alone at night.
Oh man, what a great poem! I could connect with it. And great pics to relate to it.
i love the rain. great post
I love the sound of rain. it’s calming and it put’s me to sleep. it’s even better when the powers out!
Beautiful and bittersweet.
So bittersweet. I really enjoyed reading this!